Tyrannosir

• Restaurant scene

Edit

Paced was gone - lost continuity

Sound

Ambient sound changes - solution is to overdubbing  

a dead cat would be needed for the filming.  Also a contentious ambiance sound would need to be recorded to to make the shots slide. 

Positioning 

The shots are all similar and there aren't any changes in angles and positions. 

Coverage is when you looking for additional shot might be a close up, people walking behind, sky these are very use full to place it in during the editing. 

Cut away- Close up to medium shot.

• Throwing the dog scene

Edit

Continuity is missing 

Cross cut is missing

The kick of the dog wasn't dramatic because of the editing. Slow-mo could've been used as well as repeating the loop. Also to slow-mo the flying and when it falls to bring it to the actual timing. 

Layering would've looked better in the kicking part 

Split screen to re-size the layers.

Sound

 to add a dramatic music to it.

• Funeral scene

Camera work/Cinematography 

tilt could've went from down upwards instead of going from the top to the bottom

(from the book to the face)

Shallow field off focus.

Master shots 

Shaky footage because of the absence of a tripod.

Close up the faces to show the facial expression 

tightening in.

Bronwen was looking at the camera lens.

Editing 

Need to return to the shots to create a master shot.

That creates continuity.

Cross fade from funeral to the music shop.

• Music Shop

Cinematography

foreshadowing 

cross cutting between the piano and the door.

Cross coming 

Sound

audio is quite 

A dead cat could've been used.

Edit

add in a phrase frame

do a fade at the end